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From their description: “Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers to gather once a week to share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).” Pretty cool, eh? Don’t forget to “Like” my Facebook page and/or my Facebook profile while you’re over there checking out this fantastic group!
Efren, the crown prince of Zioneven, blinked himself awake and studied the soft curls of beautiful strawberry blond hair haloing the head of the young man slumbering in his arms. Seemed like Efren should have a headache if he’d drunk enough spirits to forget bringing this one home to his bed.
But his head didn’t ache, so his personal servant, Dru, must have brought the man in after Efren had fallen asleep. Except, Dru had only ever brought him a gigolo upon request before this, never as a surprise.
He blinked again and shook the remaining cobwebs out of his head. He’d probably forgotten about an earlier solicitation he’d made to Dru when he had drunk more spirts than he should—a habit he needed to break despite his desire to “forget” about his upcoming wedding.
Odd that Efren hadn’t woken up, but his subconscious must have known he was safe. Likely he’d come half-awake or worked the action into a now-forgotten dream. Obviously, he’d done enough for Dru to feel safe leaving the man with him.
Heat swirled through Efren’s bloodstream as his gaze traveled the length of that lithe body. He wasn’t fooled by the lean physique; strength and a combination of agility and flexibility likely simmered in those beautifully toned limbs.
A lovely surprise to wake up to. He would have to give Dru a bonus…along with a caution to verify Efren was truly and fully awake before leaving a man in his bed. He drew in a lungful of berry-scented hair mixed with a clean, masculine scent.
“Wake up, my lovely.” Efren gently shook the man’s shoulder and landed a light kiss to his forehead.
The man’s eyes didn’t open, but the movement of his lids gave the impression of blinking without actually taking a peek, and his body stiffened. Perhaps he wasn’t a professional, and waking up in a stranger’s bed, he would be scouring his memory, processing where he was and how he’d come to be here.
Efren ran a finger along the man’s jaw then tipped up his chin for a proper, although still light, kiss. “Come, my lovely. Let’s make the most of this glorious morning, hmm?” He pressed his arousal against the man’s own to augment his words.
Stunning blue eyes that would beautifully reflect the Zioneven summer sky snapped open and stared in horror as if he were shackled in a Proye dungeon with Efren approaching, wielding instruments of torture.
Efren smiled reassuringly. Perhaps the young man had drunk more spirits than he was used to when he’d allowed Dru to coax him to Efren’s bed and couldn’t remember how he’d gotten here. But no, Dru would never bring him a man who was visibly drunk, so the man must be able to hold his liquor well even if it eventually affected his recall.
“You are in friendly hands, my lovely. You are free to stay or go, whichever you’d rather.” Efren held his breath and cut off his desire to plead for the man to stay.
With wide, stricken eyes, the man pushed away and scrambled out of bed. Efren huffed a heavy sigh and ran a hand over his face. He hefted himself to a sitting position as the young man stumbled to where two sets of clothing lay folded across the backs of chairs.
What had Dru been thinking? Efren gave a mental shrug. This man must be one of those whose personality changed completely when he’d been drinking to be so horrified upon realizing what he’d agreed to while under the influence.
The man sifted through the garments as his breaths grew louder and quicker. His head swiveled as he searched Efren’s bedchamber. “Where is my clothing?” His voice wafted out from between quivering lips in a breathy whimper.
More beauty than brains, perhaps? “My lovely, I’m sure they must be the smaller of those two sets.” Efren’s tone was more sardonic than he would have liked, but it was too early in the morning to deal with this level of rejection before his first cup of tea.
But he picked them up anyway and quickly but jerkily stepped into the smaller set of leather leggings before slipping the tunic over his head. His brows came together as he peered down at himself as if perplexed by the perfect custom fit.
Efren snorted, stood, pulled the bell rope to summon Dru, then stepped into his own pair of leather leggings. He held his shoulders back although his inclination was to slump. He was weary of this disappointing scene.
“As I said, my lovely, you are not a prisoner here. You need not panic so. I have plenty of enthusiastic partners available, and I feel no desire to force myself upon unwilling lovers who’ve changed their minds.” Efren waved a hand toward the door. “No doubt Dru knows to bring tea and toast for two in case you’re inclined to break your fast before rushing out, but you may leave now if you’d rather. Dru will show you out if you don’t remember the way.” Efren’s tone possibly conveyed his preference for the latter option, but basic civility and deeply ingrained diplomacy demanded he at least make a passing offer of refreshments.
This Week’s Snippet:
Change of Plans - Chapter 1 - Snippet 7
The man’s breath quickened further, and he spun before rushing to the window to throw open the heavy draperies. The sun was reflecting off Zioneven’s majestic mountains to the northeast with the sun just clearing the horizon south of where the range tapered off.
Objectively a beautiful sight, but the young man recoiled with an alarm that had ratcheted up several notches. He wobbled as he whirled in place. “Where—?” He gulped. “Who—?”
A twinge of concern prickled Efren’s neck. The man’s distress went beyond what one would expect from waking in a stranger’s bed.
Far beyond. He’d reacted as if the scenery was completely unfamiliar.
“Where are you from?” Efren asked.
“Where am I?” the young man countered.
I still don’t have a blurb, but here’s a limerick 😁:
There once was a handsome young prince, whose naïveté made himself wince. He was a huge fan of “The Contingency Plan,” till a drug turned his memory to mince.
I’ll probably have an actual blurb within a week or two. I’d hoped to write the words “the end” by the end of April, but I’m going to need Saturday (and possibly Sunday) to finish up. I’m THIS close, though. Currently the novella is sitting at 27,621 words.
In case you missed the beginning of Marcelo and Efren’s relationship—or perhaps I should say their first time around—here are some handy links (because although I always try to write sequels so random readers won’t be completely lost, this series will be best appreciated if all the stories are read in order):
15 thoughts on “RAINBOW SNIPPETS – Change of Plans – May 1-2”
Ooh, I love the snippet. I can scarce wait to discover how our heroes’ magnificent story ends😻
😂 hehe…the limerick made me laugh out loud and oh, that story board is fabulous 😁
Thank you so much! 🥰 I’m writing that ending today. The action part is done, but loose ends must be tied (and I supposed I must double back to the sexy scene I skipped and get that written too 😁). Glad you enjoyed my little limerick. I have fun writing those (and drawing my awful illustrations 🤣). ❤️
Aw…you’re welcome. 🥰Yay! I do so hope you’ll be happy with your ending and get all your loose ends tied to your satisfaction. (😂I suppose you must, tis a hard life…😁) Oh I loved it, I’m glad they’re as much fun to rustle up as read ❤️
😆Your drawings are an utter delight, y’daftie. So there.😁😘
LOL…”crap” is the proper word to describe my illustrations! 😂 They’re fun, though. 🤣 You are more than welcome to post one if you want to. ❤️ Thank you!
I plan to finish it today. All I have to do is circle back to fill in the sex scene I passed over to maintain my momentum. I’ve reread sections over and over, but I really want to reread the whole thing in one go before sending it to you, too. Might be a couple days since my household to-do list is screaming at me, but I’ll go as fast as I can. 😁
Ooh, I love the snippet. I can scarce wait to discover how our heroes’ magnificent story ends😻
😂 hehe…the limerick made me laugh out loud and oh, that story board is fabulous 😁
Thank you so much! 🥰 I’m writing that ending today. The action part is done, but loose ends must be tied (and I supposed I must double back to the sexy scene I skipped and get that written too 😁). Glad you enjoyed my little limerick. I have fun writing those (and drawing my awful illustrations 🤣). ❤️
Aw…you’re welcome. 🥰Yay! I do so hope you’ll be happy with your ending and get all your loose ends tied to your satisfaction. (😂I suppose you must, tis a hard life…😁) Oh I loved it, I’m glad they’re as much fun to rustle up as read ❤️
😆Your drawings are an utter delight, y’daftie. So there.😁😘
Thank you! ❤️ You sure do have a way of making my day! 🥰
Aw…how lovely of you to say so, thank you🥰 Reading your stories are always the cherry on top of my days❤️
❤️🧡💛💚💙💜 (ditto!)
❤🧡💛💚💙💜(Aw…thank you!🥰 )
At least they’re having an actual conversation now — sort of. Can’t wait to read more!
LOL. Yep…kinda/sorta. 😁 Thank you! ❤️
I’ve caught up with all the snippets now, and HOLY CRAP, I love the illustrations so much!! They’re just perfect! 😍
May I post one on my blog? With a proper link back to you and the snippets ofc?
And hurry to finish the story. I’m DYING to read it!! 😍
LOL…”crap” is the proper word to describe my illustrations! 😂 They’re fun, though. 🤣 You are more than welcome to post one if you want to. ❤️ Thank you!
I plan to finish it today. All I have to do is circle back to fill in the sex scene I passed over to maintain my momentum. I’ve reread sections over and over, but I really want to reread the whole thing in one go before sending it to you, too. Might be a couple days since my household to-do list is screaming at me, but I’ll go as fast as I can. 😁
When can I get my hands on this? It’s torture reading in dribs and drabs. I need to know who did this to them! I need them to be safe again! Now!
LOLOL…It’s currently in the beta-reading phase. I’m told it’ll be worked into the schedule at JMS either end of June or beginning of July. 🥰
Oh, dear…I definitely need to know what happened to these two!
Stay tuned! 😁❤️