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Change of Plans is OUT NOW at JMS Books (and all the usual distributors). Itâs a novella (~32k words), and completes a series/trilogy, following The Contingency Plan and The Best-Laid Plans.
This week Iâm snipping from a BONUS SCENE I wrote for The Contingency Plan, in which I rewrote the opening scene to be told from Efrenâs POV. In the published story, the entire first book is from Marceloâs POV.
EARLIER SNIPPETS IN THIS THREAD:
For context:
I started the snippet a little bit into the overall scene, but basically, Efren and his fellow travelers have just arrived in Sheberat for his wedding to Princess Marcela. They are still approaching the castle, but have learned that the princess died in a tragic riding accident just days earlier. In this snippet, heâs processing that information.
The Snippet:
[Efren] had no doubt, knowing what he did of Queen Giselleâs nature, that she would also prefer to finalize the peace treaty on schedule. Heâd traveled a great distance over several weeks to be here for his wedding tomorrow. Once his choice under the contingency plan was announced, there would be no sensible reason not to proceed with the wedding, albeit with a considerable role change.
He also had no doubt that the announcement of his choice would shock the Sheburat nobles to their core. The Zioneven court had submitted the wording for the marriage portion of the treatyâs contingency plan. One word in particular had been pointedly slipped in to allow them flexibility, all the while knowing the Sheburat nobles would never suspect the purpose behind that innocuous word.
Efrenâs one worry was in regard to the reaction of Prince Marcelo, Princess Marcelaâs younger twin brother. Efren had no doubt Marceloâs astonishment would eclipse that of pretty much everyone else in Sheburat. But would that jolt morph into revulsion or interest?
For Context:
Skipping forward just a bit from last weekâs snippet, Crown Prince Efren of Zioneven and his fellow travelers have just arrived in Sheberat for his wedding to Princess Marcela but have learned that the princess died in a tragic riding accident just days earlier and Efren plans to select her twin brother as her replacement under a treatyâs contingency plan. They are now assembled in the castleâs main hall.
The Snippet:
Efren stepped into place, front and center on one side of the hall, and his entourage arranged themselves around him. Queen Giselle was announced, and she nodded as she stepped into place opposite him. He returned the nod and stayed alert while the Sheburat royals and nobles were announced, one by one, as they entered and settled into formation around Queen Giselle.
One of the last to enter the great hall for this impromptu meeting was Princess Kemble, who entered with the air of someone determined to retain her dignity as she was escorted to the gallows. Her expression was tight. She obviously expected a momentary announcement sealing a fate she did not relish.
Although she would have grown up knowing she was the likely backup should Marcela die before her marriage day, sheâd no doubt grown complacent as that date approached. Her expression when he made his announcement would be as interesting to watch as Prince Marceloâs would be.Â
For Context:
Picking up immediately where we left off last week with the last of Sheburatâs royals entering the great hall to welcome the party from Zioneven.
The Snippet:
Speaking of whom, Efrenâs breath hitched as a striking young man with strawberry blond shoulder length curls stepped into place in the doorway. He had a superficial femininity, but his lithe masculinity shone through. Prince Marcelo stood straight and tall as his name was announced, and he strode gracefully to his place below the youngest of his sisters rather than in age order as they were arranged. Efren schooled his features to not display his disgust at that demeaning convention.
Efren kept his gaze on Marcelo as the young manâs features softened inquisitively even as he lifted his chin in a show of strength while he perused the people on the Zioneven side of the room. Marcelo seemed to be everything his diplomats had reported. Curious and intelligentâalbeit undereducated. He was also reportedly the most empathetic of Queen Giselleâs offspring.
Marceloâs gaze eventually landed on Efren, and the young man blinked as if surprised to find his regard returned. The muscles in Marceloâs jaw tightened, and he stared unwaveringly. He had spirit, and a corner of Efrenâs mouth quirked up before turning his head, making a point of letting Marcelo âwinâ the stare down.
For Context:
Picking up immediately where we left off last week with the Sheburatâs royals now lined up in the great hall welcoming the party from Zioneven.
The Snippet:
With everyone now in attendance, Queen Giselle stepped forward. âYour Royal Highness, Ladies and Lords, and people of Zioneven, please accept our warm welcome to Sheburat, and I hope youâll accept our sincere apology for the chaos in which you find us today.â
Efren inclined his head. âOf course, Your Majesty. On behalf of Zioneven, I offer our heartfelt condolences on the loss of your beloved daughter.â Despite acknowledging that his hopes of marital happiness had risen dramatically in the last hour, his words were sincere.
âThank you,â Queen Giselle replied. âSadly, our loss yesterday affects more than simply causing us private pain.â
âIndeed.â Prince Efren kept his reply short. Under the circumstances, diplomacy demanded he let Queen Giselle take the lead to direct the conversation. If she pointedly avoided the topic of his choosing his alternate, he would step up. But, if his diplomatsâ analysis of her strength and character was accurate, he neednât worry.Â
THIS WEEKâS SNIPPET:
For Context:
Picking up immediately where we left off last week with the Sheburatâs royals still lined up in the great hall welcoming the party from Zioneven.
The Snippet:
He let a soft sigh slip when she continued as hoped. âAlthough disappointment caused by the cancellation of the wedding weâd expected tomorrow is unavoidable,â Queen Giselle said. âI hope youâll find a small comfort in knowing that you may now make your own choice of your future bride from among my younger daughters rather than the arrangement made on your behalf at the tender age of five.â
Efren held back his threatening smile and maintained his sedate composure. Again, he inclined his head and said that one wordâthat one important word that his parents had worked into the contingency agreement. âSibling.â
About the seriesâŚ
Although I always try to write sequels so random readers wonât be completely lost, this series will be best appreciated if all the stories are read in order. Change of Plans is now available at JMS Books (and all the usual distributors).
Note: The Contingency Plan is also included in JMS Booksâ 2018 Top Ten Gay Romance:
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Note: The Contingency Plan and The Best-Laid Plans are both in Kindle Unlimited (the Books2Read links will get you there ).
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