BLOG TOUR – GUEST POST – Better Be Sure by Andy Gallo – #Excerpt #Giveaway #GuestPost


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🌟 Please welcome author Andy Gallo to Stories That Make You Smile. Andy is here today celebrating the release of his fabulous new novel, Better Be Sure. Read on to find out about the history of this story, and what happens “When Characters Won’t Leave You Alone.” 🌟

Better Be Sure by Andy Gallo

When the stakes are this high, you better be sure you can win.

Series: Harrison Campus (book #1)
Publisher: Dreamspinner Press
Cover Artist: Adrian Nicholas
Release Date: March 26, 2019
Length: Novel / 65,022 words / 206 pages
Pairing / Genre(s) / Keyword(s): M/M Contemporary Romance, Out for You, Jock, College, New Adult, Light Hearted, Gay Males

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When the stakes are this high, you better be sure you can win.

Jackson Murphy lost his parents to a boating accident, but they’re never far from his thoughts. He attends the same university as his parents, joined the same fraternity as his dad, and even lives in his father’s old room, along with his adopted brother Marcus. Life brightens when he meets the man of his dreams.

Edward Knowles trades full-time college for working during the day and community college at night when his father’s factory closes. He intends to stay deep in the closet to keep his job in heating and cooling. But Jack pushes all his buttons.

Jack’s college rival challenges him to bring a date to the upcoming dance. He goads Jack into accepting even though failure means he and Marcus will lose their room and Jack must leave the fraternity.

Jack is falling hard for Ed, but Ed will never agree to go the dance. Ed—not knowing the stakes of the wager—has also made it clear that Jack taking another man will end their romance.

With pressure from friends and enemies alike, will Jack hold on to his legacy… or his heart?


Jack’s phone buzzed, and he swatted the sound away. Too early in the damn morning. Another buzz. He drowsily pulled himself from sleep. Across the room, Marcus mumbled in his sleep.

Jack checked his phone, body surging to life at Ed’s name on the screen.

Ed: Morning!

Ed: Oh, crap, it’s probably still too early for you.

Jack couldn’t type back quick enough. Ed writing to him this early in the morning, that had to mean something, surely.

Jack: Nah, I’m totally awake. Why?

Ed: Just finished a job. Am close to Harrison….

Jack was already scrambling out of bed, messaging one-handed while he emptied his drawers for a clean shirt.

Jack: Send me your location. I’m in desperate need of caffeine. Bet you could use some too.

Ed sent a grinning dog and his location. Eighteen minutes later, Jack walked into the local Starbucks. He scanned the almost empty store and caught Ed’s broad shoulders at the counter.

Jack strode over and clapped the guy on the shoulder, giving it a lingering squeeze. “I have an eerie sense of déjà vu.”

Ed’s warm shoulder shook as he chuckled. “I haven’t mowed you down yet.”

“No, no, that you haven’t.” Their gazes snagged, and Ed definitely swallowed. Probably too early—in the day and their friendship—to tease.

Jack rocked back on his heels, dug his wallet out of his pocket, and ordered.

When they both had their drinks, they sank into armchairs in the corner of the room.

Ed’s gaze kept dipping to his chest, and Jack’s lips tipped up behind his mocha. “How was your morning job?”

“I was extremely motivated to get the job done quickly.”

Jack’s grin widened, and an ill-timed sip ended up rolling down his chin. He swiped it off. “Do you often have jobs close to Harrison?”

“Not as much as I’d like.” Ed rubbed his palm over the arm of the chair. “I mean, a lot of the time I have to drive out farther.”

“Well, any time you’re nearby….” He raised his cup.

Ed glanced at his chest again. “I like the look.”

Jack followed the sweep of Ed’s hand and—fuck. His shirt was inside out. “Right. Of course.”

Ed leaned forward in his seat, amusement lighting his eyes as he took in the rest of him. Shivers skittered through Jack, and he held his breath. “I totally woke you, didn’t I?”


The deep laugh Ed gave made it all worth it. “So you’re a high-ranking anchor in your fraternity?”

Jack snorted at the muff. From the way Ed stared at him, it was hard to tell if he’d done it on purpose or really had the term mixed up.

“We prefer to pronounce it ‘archon,’ but either way, I’m one of the fraternity leaders, yes.”

“Do you like it?”

“Which? Being in the fraternity or being an officer?”


Of course he’d want Jack to answer both. “Yeah, for the most part. I mean, there are a couple guys I wish weren’t my brothers, but that’s how it is.”

“How’d you pick that fraternity?”

“There wasn’t really any other option.”

Ed’s brow furrowed. “I thought Harrison had a lot of fraternities.”

“No, not like that.” Jack waved his hand and shook his head. “My dad, both of them were in Pi Kappa Phi. Marcus and I grew up hearing all the stories about their days in the house.”

“Wow, that’s cool.”

“Yeah, they met when they were freshmen and were friends until… well… until my parents died.” He thought he’d been ready to deal with the issue, but confronted with it, he froze.

Ed scooted up on his chair, leaning forward. “You okay, Jack?”

Jack rubbed the ring at the chain around his neck and drew in a calming breath. “Yeah. Yeah.”

Ed seemed to realize Jack needed a change in conversation, because he abruptly started telling Jack how his sister had woken him last night screaming murder. She’d gone to the bathroom at night, and when she walked back to her room, someone was in there, rustling the sheets.

Ed had launched into her room with a bat only to be confronted with their cat. The first time the cat decided not to be shy. In the middle of the night, rolling around Becky’s bed. They laughed so hard, they needed to make a cup of hot milk to settle down again.

“Sounds like you’re a good guy to have around… wayward cats.” And panicking… friends.

Ed sipped his coffee. “What about you?”

“I like to think I’m a good guy to have around too.”

“I’m sure you are.” Ed set his coffee down. “Look, about last night….”

Jack clasped his cup, muscles rigid. Here it was. “Yeah?”

Air blew into the café along with a group of rowdy hipster students toting stainless steel cups. Jack shuffled forward on the cushion to hear Ed better, but Ed’s gaze strayed toward group and his mouth flattened.

Jack cursed the interruption, but it was clear the moment had passed.

“What are your plans the rest of the day?” Ed asked instead.

“The rest of the day?”

Ed laughed, and Jack soaked it up.

“Class, bantering with Brittany—she’s awesome—frat meeting about the spring formal, messing around with the guys. Might squeeze some actual study in there.” A lot of study, actually.

“Messing around with the guys?”

That piqued your interest, did it? Jack smirked. “Play a bit of ball if the weather holds. Get out the PlayStation and hit the video games if it doesn’t.”

“What’s the spring formal?”

Jack groaned. “The bane of my life.”

☆ Guest Post ☆

When Characters Won’t Leave You Alone

First, thank you Addison for being the first stop on my blog tour. To kick things off I thought I’d give a bit of history to the book and the series.

About eight years ago, Anyta Sunday and I decided to enter a writing contest on the Gay Authors website. Our entry, Bettor to Lose, won first prize. It was a nice story, but it needed work. Then both of us went on to different things—Anyta to becoming a fantastic full-time author with more than a dozen books, and I detoured to writing fantasy. But the story and the characters stuck with us. So we reworked the story, changed the title to Better Be Sure and sent it off into the world.

But it is the characters’ refusal to leave us alone that brings me here today. The process of coming up with Jack & Ed, Marcus & Nessa, Brittany, Billy, Seth, Harper and everyone else, involved a lot of back and forth between us. Unlike writing alone, collaboration requires you to tell someone else about your character before you write them. The back and forth anchored these characters firmly in my head. I felt like I knew them as well as the characters in my fantasy series that is about ten times longer.

Anyta and I also had to defend our vision of characters to each on several occasions. One or the other would say, “I don’t see Jack doing that.” Or “Ed would say something like that.” And we’d have to discuss who they were and how they’d react. Much like a thesis or dissertation, being forced to defend your position requires you be intimately connected to your subject. Once you have that connection, it doesn’t disappear, even when you’ve moved on to other characters.

Another reason I feel more connected to these characters is they grew up with Anyta and me. As we evolved as writers, so too did our characters. They might not have aged, but they certainly grew. And they also had to grow in a way that worked for two writers with strong opinions. Anyta and I ended up leaving little bits of ourselves in each. With each addition, I felt my character mature and became closer to them.

The end result are people I wouldn’t recognize when we started the story. I still have the original character sheets for Jack and Ed, and while they are at their core the same two people, they are much different now than when they were “born.” And that’s for the best. The people you’ll meet in Better Be Sure are better for their (and our) journey. They feel more alive and have more depth. At least I think so. Hopefully you will too.

In addition to the tour wide contest, at each stop on the blog tour, Anyta and I are giving away eBook copies of (Un)Masked—which we co-wrote—and Leo Love Aries—the first book in Anyta’s Signs of Love series. To be eligible, leave a comment below and tell us whether it pulls you from the story if the characters act ‘out of character.’ We’ll pick one winner for each book.*

*Readers are eligible to win one eBook during the tour and one of the three grand prizes.

Meet the Author

Andy Gallo prefers mountains over the beach, coffee over tea, and regardless if you shake it or stir it, he isn’t drinking a martini. He remembers his “good old days” as filled with mullets, disco music, too-short shorts, and too-high socks. Thanks to good shredders and a lack of social media, there is no proof he ever descended into any of those evils.

Andy does not write about personal experiences and no living or deceased ex-boyfriends appear on the pages of his stories. He might subconsciously infuse his characters with some of their less noble qualities, but that is entirely coincidental even if their names are the same. And while Andy leaves the hard sci-fi/fantasy for his alter ego, Andrew, in his mind a touch of the supernatural never derailed a good relationship.

Married and living his own happy every after, Andy helps others find their happy endings in the pages of his stories. He and his husband of more than twenty years spend their days raising their daughter and rubbing elbows with other parents. Embracing his status as the gay dad, Andy sometimes has to remind others that one does want a hint of color even when chasing after their child.

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Andy is giving away a $25 Dreamspinner gift certificate, two audio codes, and 3 $5 Amazon gift cards with this tour. Enter via Rafflecopter for a chance to win.

In addition to the tour wide contest, at each stop on the blog tour, Anyta and Andy are giving away eBook copies of (Un)Masked— which they co-wrote—and Leo Love Aries—the first book in Anyta’s Signs of Love series. To be eligible, leave a comment below and tell them whether it pulls you from the story if the characters act ‘out of character.’ They’ll pick one winner for each book.*

*Readers are eligible to win one eBook during the tour and one of the three grand prizes.

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5 thoughts on “BLOG TOUR – GUEST POST – Better Be Sure by Andy Gallo – #Excerpt #Giveaway #GuestPost

    1. You’re so welcome! Best wishes for a successful tour. Your post has gotten a LOT of clicks, even though there aren’t any comments yet to show for it. ❤️

  1. For me, it depends whether the character’s reasons make sense, or if it’s clearly an artificial plot device…

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