RAINBOW SNIPPETS – 2019-Dec-7 – When Are You?
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This week I’m snipping from my current WiP, When Are You?
It’s a time travel story, and this is the opening scene. The story is unedited, so please squint as needed.
From Leo’s 3rd-person POV:
βNo.β Leo snorted. βI donβt get any kind of sinister feel from him. I think maybe heβs curious about us because weβre new to town, and yeah, maybe because weβre a gay couple. But, heβs not following us. Heβs awkward and anything-but-inconspicuous, so that makes us more likely to notice him.β
βWeirdo,β Vinnie muttered.
βExactly.β Besides, Leo might be a teacher nowβa product of the Troops to Teachers programβbut heβd spent years deployed in the elite military unit, Delta Force. His training had been intense and wide-ranging, to put it mildly, and that was on top of the two black belts heβd earned prior to joining the military. He could handle creeper guy.

I don’t have a real blurb yet, but in the meantime…
LIMERICK
There once was a family so gay,
who were going on their merry way,
when a portal appeared,
which they thought they had cleared,
but they lost their sweet boy that fine day.
HAIKU
Oscarβs such a dear.
Pity what happened to him.
When are you, sweet child?
~
I guess you could tack on…
“Will our loving heroes find a way to rescue their sweet boy, or is he doomed to spend the rest of his life with the earliest of the USA’s primitive settlers? Or is there a third alternative?”
…to the end of my *cough* top-notch poetry for a general idea of what the story’s about.


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A very logical argument, Leo, but I’m gonna agree with Vinnie.
LOL…Neither is spot on with their guesses at this point, but Vinnie’s probably closer. π
Heh, looks like he’s got nothing to worry about. Love the poem (heart)
Riiight…nothing at all. π
Thank you! π
This sounds promising!!
Thank you! π
I’d be tempted to smile and wave at creeper guy by this point.
Hahaha…that would evoke quite a different reaction than what Leo and Vinnie might be expecting at this point. π
Hmm. I’d be all reassured by Leo’s qualifications, except that I have a feeling you’re about to throw something at them that he *can’t* handle! π
I have the feeling your feeling is spot on. ππ
Hopefully Leo isn’t proven wrong!
Fingers crossed! π
Both Leo and the awkward guy sounds very interesting.
Thank you! πΉ
I have a bad feeling Leo is about to be proven wrong.
Kinda sorta? π€·ββοΈβ€οΈ
Hm, I feel that all that military / martial training sin’t going to help in this situation!
π Hahaha…I think you might be right. At least it won’t help prevent the “situation” from occuring, but perhaps it’ll help them down the road?