I’ve joined the Rainbow Snippets group on Facebook. From their description: “Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers to gather once a week to share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).” Pretty cool, eh? Don’t forget to “Like” my Facebook page and/or my Facebook profile while you’re over there checking out this fantastic group!
I’m continuing the thread I started last week from Closets Are for Clothes featuring Mike & Wes. For general context, Mike is heading “home” to Kansas to come out to his parents.
Told from Mike’s 1st-person POV.
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This Week’s Snippet:
The beverage cart rattled down the aisle with the two flight attendants working together. I was near the back, so it didn’t take long to reach me. I got a ginger ale, hoping it would settle my stomach. My seat partner got a beer, and thankfully didn’t do or say anything rude. Apparently, he was more of a behind-your-back bigot rather than in-your-face. Not that he deserved any honor for that.
Dream On – Book 1 – Closets Are for Clothes
42,719 words / 136 Pages (PDF)
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Mike’s life is carefully compartmentalized. He’s deep in the closet to his family back in Kansas, but lives life honestly and openly in Austin. He’s unnerved when Wes, his old university crush, turns up at his door in answer to a roommate advertisement, but quickly sees the potential…benefits of the arrangement. Wes has never doubted nor denied his sexuality. With the support of his family he’s an out and proud LGBT activist.
On the scale balancing his self-esteem on one side, and the love of his family on the other, Mike has to decide which weighs more. Is Mike being fair to his parents by not giving them the chance to know his real self? When the delicate balance of his life is disrupted, he decides he’s tired of living a lie. Will Wes understand his concerns, or will their fledgling relationship crumble under the strain of Mike’s uncertainty?
NOTE: Closets Are for Clothes is a from-the-ground-up comprehensively rewritten and reedited version of A Dream Come True (published by Addison at Torquere Press in February, 2009). While the theme of the original story is the same, and many important scenes will be recognizable, the way the characters deal with important events is handled differently than in the original story and much of the story’s backdrop and side characters have changed. Beyond converting the story from an alternating 3rd-person POV to being told entirely from Mike’s 1st-person POV, this is a significantly changed retelling of the story.
14 thoughts on “#RainbowSnippets 10-Feb-2018 – Closets Are for Clothes”
How awesome that you reworked a story. I’ve been doing a lot of that, myself. ~grin~ Nice snippet and fabulous title! Be well.
Thank you! Good luck on your rewrites. 💕
Hahaha. Still, in-your-face bigots are the worst so every little helps… 😄
True…drive the bigots into the closet! 😁
Poor Mike. I can’t help but wonder if his upset stomach is down to air sickness or his nervousness about coming out to his parents.
Indeed. He’s “worried sick” about their potential reaction. 😉
I’m emphasizing more and more with this feeling of sickness (not just because I’ve felt it myself on a plane)…poor guy.
I would be nice karma if he got sick on the bigot. Sadly I only just thought of that, so it didn’t happen. 😉
Ugh, bigots. Can’t live with them, can’t shoot them. What to do, what to do? 🙂
Sit and stew, or give ’em hell. I vote for the latter. 😁
Poor guy, I hope the flight isn’t too awful.
He’ll live through it. 😉
Not that I like anxiety as such, but you did such a great job with it here!