I’ve joined the Rainbow Snippets group on Facebook. From their description: “Rainbow Snippets is a group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers to gather once a week to share six sentences from a work of fiction–a WIP or a finished work or even a 6-sentence book recommendation (no spoilers please!).” Pretty cool, eh? Don’t forget to “Like” my Facebook page and/or my Facebook profile while you’re over there checking out this fantastic group!
I’m snipping from The Recruit, a 21k-word novella due out at JMS Books on June 16. For context, Phillip has been selected for recruit by the local vampire faction. He was approached by Albert while walking in the park, and an offer to join the vampires’ ranks has been extended.
Albert Manlii has walked this earth for more than two thousand years, but survival on his own was never easy. Now he leads a faction of highly organized vampires who carefully guard the secret of their existence. Unlike the old days, potential recruits are carefully selected and presented with an offer.
Phillip Brewer has weeks to live—if he lets his disease run its course. He doesn’t want to die, but given a choice, will his desire to live outweigh his concerns about the vampires’ ethics?
When the new recruit’s missteps are cause for concern, can Albert control the fallout, or will Phillip’s life once again be torn apart?
Told from Phillip’s 3rd-person POV.
This Week’s Snippet:
Phillip bit his lip and gazed around the park. Albert had looked around before the arm demonstration. Presumably to make sure nobody was watching. But, the same people Phillip had noticed before had remained in their same positions, and Albert hadn’t been concerned about them.
Phillip wasn’t sure how they’d do it, but clearly he wasn’t walking away from here if he declined the offer. They had too much on the line. He’d planned on killing himself within a few hours anyway, so that didn’t actually frighten him.
16 thoughts on “#RainbowSnippets 5-May-2018 – The Recruit”
Ooh! Thank you for sharing. And Happy Writing!
Thank you! ♡
Oh man, that last paragraph! Jarring – definitely caught my attention.
Poor Phillip is in a sad situation. 😔
Intense, arousing interest in the situation, along with sympathy for poor Phillip.
Thank you! 💖
Dang Phillip is in a hard place. Great snip.
He is indeed. Thank you! 💖
I like the set-up here! Raises interesting questions. 🙂
Thank you! 💕
I’m eager to read the finished version! 🙂
💖 Quite a few changes since your early beta-read!
Poor Phillip now I’m wondering what’s killing him.
That’ll be detailed in the story, but the best thing is he now has a choice. 😉