RAINBOW SNIPPETS 2023/09/23 ~ In Celebration of Redhead Appreciation Day! #RainbowSnippets

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I’m snipping from my recent release, Luck of the Draw.

It’s “Redhead Appreciation Day,” and unless I’m forgetting someone, I think Dukan from Luck of the Draw is the only main character I’ve written to be a redhead, so of course, I had to dig up a snippet to highlight that!

I’ve gone ahead and left the previous snippets under the spoiler tags, but they don’t immediately precede this one, so you don’t need it for context. It’s just there in case you’re interested.

It’s all from Obren’s 3rd-Person POV:

🔽 🔼 Luck of the Draw – Chapter 1: Drawing Straws (Complete)
Luck of the Draw

by: Addison Albright

Chapter 1: Drawing Straws

Obren, a prince of Canna, had drawn straws many times in the past, but never had the stakes been so high. This time it was not about who would go first or last either in childhood games of years gone by, or in sexual liaisons from more recent years. It was not about who would help pitch the army tents versus dig the holes for the latrine. Or fill them in, later, when breaking camp.

This time, the rest of his life was at stake. Not life or death itself, but the direction his life would follow and its potential to bring him happiness.

Obren’s stomach twisted into a knot as his father, King Rogan of Canna, offered his closed fist. Obren drew in a deep breath, understanding, to the marrow of his bones, that any plea to avoid this choice was pointless. A straw must be drawn, and as the older of the two brothers, he would draw first.

Not that the order of drawing mattered. Whether or not he drew the short straw would be down to luck. The luck of the draw would decide his life’s path. His hand twitched as he checked a nervous impulse to smooth down his already neatly styled blond hair.

Obren closed his eyes, shut out the sounds of his father’s heavy breathing, and focused on preventing the quiver building in his gut from reaching his hand as he lifted it. He paused and opened his eyes. Was there any possible stratagem he could employ to boost his chances?

“Just pick one,” Lale hissed. “Let’s get this over with.” Lale, being Obren’s younger brother, was as invested in the outcome as was Obren.

Obren swallowed, squared his shoulders, and snatched one of the two straws sticking up from Father’s fist. He stepped back and stared at the stick, but it gave him no information.

No useful information, anyway. Length could be both absolute and relative. He could see that the absolute length of his straw was about six knuckles long. But it was the length relative to the straw remaining in Father’s hand that would give the answer.

Lale strode swiftly forward and grabbed the remaining straw. The brothers stood staring at one another for ten solid beats before slowly raising their hands to compare straws.

Obren stared blankly at them, but it was the slow grin spreading across Lale’s face that came into focus first. Lale held the longer of the two.

Heat suffused Obren’s face as he snapped his straw in half and let the two pieces drop to the floor.

“Enough of that.” The king used his regal tone, usually reserved for court. “You will do your duty, and you will do it without displays that should have been left behind when you graduated out of the nursery.”

Obren clenched his jaw. He shouldn’t say anything more, but his mouth ran on unheeded. “I’m older. It wouldn’t have been out of order for you to have decided based upon our ages.”

“Your sisters are older still. You’re not even the spare, let alone the heir. You don’t matter.”

Lale snorted, and Obren shot a glare in his direction. But Lale was looking at their father with an unwise expression of disgust. The snort hadn’t been directed at Obren; it had been in response to Father’s unkind remark about both of their worth.

Obren softened his own expression, and when Lale returned his gaze to Obren, Lale swallowed, and said, “Obren’s right. Neither of us wants this, of course, but it should be me.”

The two brothers had never been the best of friends. Their personalities didn’t align well for that. But they’d always felt the bond of brotherhood, and here, Lale probably felt a sense of duty to repay Obren for saving his life amidst a fierce battle in the final year of the war.

Obren wasn’t entirely sure if his conscience would have allowed him to let Lale take this burden upon himself after winning the draw—probably not, impulsive comment notwithstanding—but that option wasn’t on the table.

“Nonsense. The selection was fairly made,” the king said with a glare of his own directed at Obren. “I expect you to behave like a rational adult at both the reunion dinner this evening and the ball tomorrow night.”

Obren held in his retort and gave a curt nod before turning on his heel and striding, with as much dignity as he could muster, from the room.

Anger roiled through his belly as he raced through the castle hallways to his suite of rooms. His footsteps clicked on the stone floor and echoed through the empty passages. A lingering whiff of the sausages they’d eaten at breakfast still hung in the air.

It was an understatement to say that Father preferred Lale. Had done since Obren had been a schoolboy. In fact, Obren wouldn’t be surprised to learn if Father had somehow manipulated the straws to ensure Obren picked the shorter of the two.

Father had never forgiven him for his mother’s death. As if Obren had deliberately caught the jumping spotty fever. He certainly hadn’t been aware enough during the height of his illness to influence his mother to stay away from him. She’d nursed him, as a loving mother would do, and she’d become ill herself, succumbing to the disease whereas Obren had recovered.

Once in his suite, he flopped face down onto the bed and screamed into his pillow.

🔽 🔼 Luck of the Draw – Chapter 2: Oh, Dear (Complete)

Chapter 2: Oh, Dear

Some hours later, Obren’s personal servant, Zeko, tapped lightly, then opened the door to his chamber. “Lord Tomo Strugar and Lord Milun Lompar are here to see you, sir.”

Obren heaved himself to a sitting position and sighed. “Thank you, Zeko. Show them into my sitting room, please.”

“Will you require my assistance getting yourself in order, sir?”

Obren shook his head. “Thank you, Zeko. I’ll deal with it.”

With a nod, Zeko backed out and quietly snicked the door closed. Obren took a deep breath, slipped on his shoes, stood, strode to his dressing table, and gazed at himself in the mirror. His pale blond hair was now an untidy mess, but no more than he could repair himself with the help of a brush and without recalling Zeko to redo the plait at his nape.

He poured water from the pitcher into its basin and splashed some onto his face. After patting himself dry with a soft flannel, he straightened his shirtsleeves and waistcoat, fiddled with his neckcloth, and slipped into his jacket.

His best friends were already seated in his private sitting room when he entered from his bedchamber. He nodded to each in turn. “Tomo, Milun.”

“Were you in there pouting?” Milun asked in a tone a full octave higher than his natural voice. The tone he used to mimic his old nanny.

“Oh, stuff it.” Obren flopped heavily onto a large, soft chair. “I’m not in the mood.”

Tomo leaned forward with a mildly scrunched brow. “Want to tell us about it?”

Obren huffed. No amount of well-meaning advice would get him out of this situation, but at least he could get his grievances off his chest. “You know there’s a marriage agreement in the peace treaty, right?”

They both nodded, and Milun said, “Details haven’t come out, but yes, we know that much.”

“Truly, though,” Tomo said. “It’s not as if you were ever likely to marry for love. You’re a prince. Your father would have arranged a beneficial and diplomatic match regardless of this treaty.”

“We’re rungs below you,” Milun added. “And even we will at best have the power of veto when our parents decide they want to forge an alliance with another family, and we’d best use that power with discretion lest the next one they propose be worse and come with more pressure to assent.”

Obren waved a hand, dismissing their attempts to placate him. “I know that, of course, but listen. There are various ways they could have gone with this, but—” Obren snorted. “It was my father who insisted on this because he claimed Butari would get off unfairly easy otherwise.”

Milun cocked his head. “What are they doing?”

“You know, of course, that all three realms lost either sons or sons-in-law in the war.”

They both nodded. Canna had lost Pejo, Obren’s eldest brother, the former heir. They’d also lost his eldest sister, Jova’s, husband. Pretin had lost one of their younger princes, and Butari had lost their daughter’s husband.

“They want the marriages to happen now, with no delay to wait for the younger ones to grow up first, so they’re not being considered at all in the agreement.” The monarchs in Pretin and Butari both had children that fell into that category.

Tomo squinted. “So that leaves what? Four eligible for marriage in each of the realms.”

Milun shook his head. “But there’s an out-of-balance. Canna and Pretin have two each eligible men and women, but in Butari, it’s three men and one woman.”

“Right. Thus, my father’s insistence that it would be unfair if two men merely married noblewomen from the other realms rather than daughters of the monarch.”

“Got it,” Tomo said. “So only two from each realm must marry in the agreement, and you’re one of them?”

“I wish, but no. Father insisted that for a solid alliance, all of the eligible princes and princesses had to be included, and that means one prince from either Pretin or Canna must marry one of the princes of Butari.”

“Egad.” Tomo sat up straighter. “And you’re it?”

Milun leaned forward with widened eyes that didn’t quite reflect horror, but certainly expressed shock.

And who could blame him. It was a rather extreme solution to a situation that was neither nearly as unfair nor as weak as Father had made it out to be, so likely there were things left unsaid regarding his motivations.

Obren gave a tight nod. “Father lost a roll of the dice deciding whether Canna or Pretin would provide a son to marry one of the Princes of Butari, and I just drew the short straw to narrow it down between me and Lale.”

“A run of bad luck.” Milun scratched his head. “Another man is good for friendship and for sexual relations. I wouldn’t want to marry one.”

“Frankly…” Tomo scratched his head. “I’ve never considered it before. But other than the lack of offspring, would it really be so bad?”

Obren raised his hands, palms up. “That’s a rather important ‘other than,’ don’t you think? Yes, I knew I might or might not have ended up in a relationship with someone I could grow to care for, but I looked forward to raising children. Passing my skills down to my children.”

Much as Obren’s brother, Pejo, had done for Obren after Father’s essential abandonment of responsibility for his upbringing. After his illness, Obren had been left weaker than most men. By no means an invalid, but no longer a good candidate for sword-fighting.

Instead, he’d trained as an archer, and Pejo had also encouraged him to strengthen his skills with a slingshot. It was a skill everyone else left behind in childhood, but Pejo had said, “Even with resupply, you might run out of arrows, but you can usually find stones. And it’s no burden to tuck the slingshot into your waistband.”

That advice was how he’d saved Lale’s life during one memorable battle. He’d been temporarily cut off from resupply, but indeed, he’d found some stones.

Obren tightened his jaw. He would have passed those things on to all his sons, without favoritism, especially for things outside of their control.

“Well, yes, there is that.” Tomo sighed. “And I suppose you won’t have the best of both worlds anymore, but I don’t think it’s such a bad situation.”

Meaning sexual relations between men and women who weren’t a married couple was severely frowned upon, but when he married, he and his wife could have enjoyed relations together. Otherwise, men and women, whether single or married, could freely enjoy relations with others of their same sex.

And why not? There was no possibility of offspring to muddy the waters of parental lineage. Obren had no concerns about a physical relationship with another man. Not unless he actively disliked the fellow.

Milun heaved another overly dramatic sigh. “Nothing to do other than to make the best of it, I suppose.”

Tomo straightened again, and this time, warily narrowed his eyes. “Do you know which Butari brother you’re to marry? One of the younger two, obviously.”

Because clearly, it wouldn’t be Butari’s crown prince, and their princess was their spare.

Obren lifted one shoulder in a halfhearted shrug. Then shot out of his chair as the reason for Tomo’s wariness finally occurred to him.

Of the two potential Butari princes, the younger of the two, Dukan, was known for having a clear preference for relations with men over women. Not that any of them experienced relations with the opposite sex outside of marriage, but one knew their own inclinations. Obren, like most, was attracted to both sexes.

Prince Dukan was known to have been in a years’ long serious—and as rumor had it, exclusive—relationship with Lord Vidan Faddy. It was said to have been a love relationship of the kind one hoped for in marriage. Not that they would ever have expected to unite in marriage.

Each would have married to strengthen political or business associations but would have continued their physical relationship alongside that. It happened all the time. In fact, Lord Faddy had been married.

That wouldn’t have concerned Obren at all. The two of them could be married, but they needn’t be exclusive as far as relations with other men went. If Prince Dukan wanted to focus his attentions on his relationship with Lord Faddy, Obren could find a lover of his own or could continue to get with whomever was handy and interested when the mood struck, as he did now.

He’d long ago accepted that a love match was unlikely for himself. As Tomo had said, he’d always been destined for an arranged marriage.

The problem was that Lord Vidan Faddy was the man Obren had killed with a stone from his slingshot as the man had been a fraction of a moment away from running his sword through Lale’s belly.

“Oh, dear,” Obren said. He paced to the fireplace and back. “Oh, dear,” he repeated.

“Oh, dear,” Milun echoed Obren’s words as a figurative candle lit over his head, and he, too, worked out Tomo’s concern. “But surely your father is aware of this.”

Indeed. Lale obviously knew, and therefore most likely, King Rogan did, too. Obren snorted indelicately. “Which means it probably is Prince Dukan.”

🔽 🔼 Luck of the Draw – Chapter 3: Meet and Greet (Partial)

Chapter 3: Meet and Greet

“Probably” didn’t mean “absolutely,” but considering how Obren’s luck had gone thus far in the inter-realm matrimonial segment of the peace treaty, he wasn’t holding out hope. He didn’t otherwise know much about either Prince Dukan or the other possible brother, Prince Novak, but the likelihood of achieving an amicable relationship was doubtful if Prince Dukan discovered his secret.

What, if anything, to do about it weighed heavily on Obren’s mind as he entered the large hall outside the dining room where the dinner to formally bring together the three royal families and top-ranked diplomats would soon begin. He pointedly lifted his chin so as not to advertise the lump churning in his gut.

He turned when a hand landed on his shoulder. Lale’s face was carefully neutral, but he’d never been good at keeping his emotions from his eyes, and now they advertised concern.

“How are you holding up?”

Obren shrugged. “I’ll be fine.”

“I was thinking—” Lale cleared his throat, and now his eyes added a hint of dread to go along with the concern. “I’m going to approach Father again. Before, I was only considering that I owed you for saving my life, but once I started thinking about that, I remembered who had been killed in my stead, and…you’re aware with whom that man had been in a relationship, right?”

Obren nodded grimly. “Yes, but don’t bother. You know Father won’t budge, especially if he thinks it’ll bring me sorrow. Besides, would it truly be better for Dukan if he married the man who is alive only because his love is dead, rather than the man who’d facilitated it?” Obren’s cheek twitched. “Maybe it’ll be Novak?”

Lale scrunched his face and lifted one shoulder. “I wouldn’t bet on it, but I suppose that’s possible.”

Lale’s gaze lit on someone off to the side, and his eyes widened with interest. Obren turned to see what, or rather who, had captured Lale’s attention. One of the princesses from Pretin, judging from the flowing style of her clothing. She was lovely and looked to be close to Lale’s age or a little younger.

“Go ahead. Introduce yourself,” Obren said. If the rest of them had any say in the matchups, Lale needed to circulate.

“Right.” Lale nodded, and his brow rose. “You sure you’re all right?”

“Yes, I’m fine. Go. I need to do my own meeting and greeting, too.”

Lale gave him a wry smile and ambled off in the direction of the pretty young woman.

Many of those in attendance had met, years earlier. Some knew each other by reputation and perhaps by sight.

The princes and princesses of Butari and Canna had met once as children after Obren’s illness and before the long war had torn apart the three realms. Since Obren had tagged along on Pejo’s heels, basking in the glow of his brother’s encouragement and approval, he’d spent more time in the company of the older boys than with his own contemporaries.

Dukan was three years older than himself. Mischievous— or had been—and he’d inherited his mother’s coppery red hair, making him easy to spot in a crowded room. Obren recalled less about Novak, who’d been rather nondescript in appearance, so he couldn’t narrow down which of the men attired in brightly colored Butari-styled clothing might be him.

Meet-and-greet was the purpose of this pre-dinner gathering. Father had decreed that he behave like a rational adult this evening, not that Obren truly needed such an insulting instruction. So, he drew in a calming breath and wove his way through the throng toward the man who either was his soon-to- be husband or could point him in the direction of the man who was.

Upon Obren’s approach—obviously making a beeline in his direction—Prince Dukan looked away from the young woman he was conversing with to gaze questioningly into Obren’s eyes. Not much in Obren’s appearance stood out, but his blond hair was lighter than most, even within his own family. That, and his more sedate, Canna-styled clothing likely informed Dukan of his identity.

When Obren drew to a halt in front of him, Dukan stuck out his hand, and Obren grasped it. His hand was warm and dry, and his grip was firm but not unnecessarily so.

Dukan slightly tipped his head to one side. “You are Prince Obren of Canna, yes?”

“I am.” Obren inclined his head. “And am I correct that you are Prince Dukan of Butari?”

The woman Dukan had been speaking with slipped away unobtrusively as Dukan nodded in turn. “I am.”

His eyes no longer projected confusion. Wariness, yes, and if Obren was right, perhaps just a touch of hope as well.

“You’ve heard, then?” One of Dukan’s brows flicked ever- so-slightly toward his hairline.

“Surmised.” Obren shrugged. “I figured you could point me in Prince Novak’s direction if I was wrong.”

Dukan’s lips twitched briefly into a grin, and he patted his copper-colored hair. It wasn’t quite as bright as it had been when they’d been children. “Ah, yes. I can’t really hide in a crowd, can I?”

The color had deepened since they’d last seen each other, and the thick waves had tightened, but the look was still uncommon. His short and tidy facial hair was new.

Obren returned the grin. Something about the gleam of hope growing in Dukan’s eyes tugged at his heartstrings. Except for that lingering ugliness from the war hanging between them, he could see himself agreeing with Tomo.

This wouldn’t be so bad. He could be a doting uncle, if not a father.

Wouldn’t have been so bad. But if Dukan learned what Obren had done, that look in his eyes would harden.

“And yes,” Dukan continued. “You surmised correctly. I volunteered.”

Obren blinked. “Oh?” Then he smirked. “Before or after you heard I was selected?

Dukan’s eyes flickered with a hint of suppressed laughter. “Before. Novak is one of those unfortunates who feels no attraction to other men whatsoever, so it would have been a burden for him. And…selected? I heard you drew the short straw.”

🔽 🔼 Luck of the Draw – Chapter 5: Not Dishonorable (Random Snippet for “Make Your Own Luck Day”)

His future was set, and there was nothing he was willing to do to change it. All he could change was his outlook…change how well he accepted his fate and work toward living a happy existence.

Oddly, picturing a hurt, offended expression on Dukan’s face when he learned Obren would rather risk all that than be with him was the most compelling reason of all to reject the path inspired by that raven.

Obren tried to focus his thoughts on Dukan. On the man’s quirky grin, and on the hope that occasionally shone from his eyes. He thought back to what he remembered from their time together as children.

From Chapter 9: The Unforgiven (Hopeful opening lines of the chapter for a “Redhead Appreciation Day”-themed snippet. Alas, the hope in that cheery beginning is about to be dashed.) ~ Obren’s POV:


Obren giggled and wriggled as he emerged from the fog of sleep. He blinked a few times, and a face upon which he would never tire of gazing, surrounded by a sleep-tousled mop of coppery hair, came into focus.

A familiar warm hand belonging to that roguish man who had the skills to back up his cocky grin was lightly trailing along a particularly ticklish section of his side. Thus, the giggling and wriggling.

The outer door to Obren’s suite snicked open and closed, and Dukan’s expression morphed into a mild pout as he removed his hand and turned toward the bed chamber door. Obren propped himself up on his elbows and said, “Enter,” in response to a light knock.


Drawing the short straw is
bad luck, isn’t it?

Release Date: Saturday, July 22, 2023

Publisher: JMS Books, LLC

Length: Novella / 25,700 Words

Genre: Gay Light Fantasy Romance

Pairings: M/M, Gay/Bisexual

Tropes: Peace Treaty, Arranged Marriage

Themes: Accepting Fate, Dark Secrets, Forgiveness


Drawing the short straw is bad luck…isn’t it?

Arranged marriage with a twist! Princes Obren and Dukan are willing to do whatever it takes to finalize the treaty ending the war that took the lives of their loved ones…Obren’s brother and Dukan’s lover.

They can’t deny their chemistry, but can they overcome the ugly truths complicating their path to a friendly and—dare they hope—loving relationship?


Drawing the short straw is bad luck…isn’t it?

A treaty between three warring realms calls for a mass wedding ceremony amongst their eligible princes and princesses to solidify the peace. But since the number of males and females differ, one of the marriages must be between two of the princes.

Prince Obren of Canna draws the short straw, sealing his fate, and Prince Dukan of Butari volunteers to be the other half of the nontraditional marriage. The two princes fought nobly in the years-long war and are willing to do whatever it takes to finalize the treaty, ending the conflict that took the lives of their loved ones…Obren’s brother and Dukan’s lover.

Each harbors a dark secret, and King Rogan of Canna has long nurtured a deep hatred of Obren, blaming him for bringing home the deadly virus responsible for the untimely death of his much-adored wife. Obren and Dukan can’t deny their chemistry, but can they overcome the ugly truths complicating their path to a friendly, respectful, and—dare they hope—loving relationship? Will King Rogan stop at nothing to dash Obren’s chance at happiness, or does that short straw represent good luck, after all?


Obren had to draw
a straw to decide his fate.
He drew the short one.


There once was a prince from Canna.
Draw a straw? He just didn’t wanna!
But choose one he must,
and now he must trust,
his hopes won’t be dashed by the drama.

6 thoughts on “RAINBOW SNIPPETS 2023/09/23 ~ In Celebration of Redhead Appreciation Day! #RainbowSnippets

  1. I forgot all about Redhead Appreciation Day! And it’s the same day as Celebrate Bisexuality Day, could’ve done a two-birds-one-stone. *hangs head*

    I do love this piece, though. Such a shame they got interrupted.

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