I’m participating in the A to Z blogger challenge this year. Since April also is the anniversary month for the release of my novel, ’Til Death Do Us Part, I thought I’d use that for the theme of my posts. For each letter I will come up with a word that is pertinent to the story, and post a short excerpt featuring it.
In general these excerpts will bounce around the timeline (after all, the story isn’t told in alphabetical order). No worries, I’ll give a little context leading into each scene so it won’t be necessary to read the others to enjoy the snippet-of-the-day.
J is for Major Johnson
Major Johnson is a minor character with a big role. He’s the one who informs Sam Miller-Greene (and his new fiancé, Nash) that Henry, long thought to have died, is in fact alive. This scene is actually from the prologue. It cuts off here, then picks up again at the appropriate place in the body of the story. Since the MCs will be apart for much of the story, this prologue gives the reader a light at the end of the tunnel. It is told from Sam’s 3rd-person POV:
Major Johnson cleared his throat, took a quick look at Nash, then returned his focus to Sam. “Dr. Miller-Greene, a discovery was made this morning during a drone training exercise in the Pacific.”
Fucking hell. A “discovery” in the fucking Pacific Ocean. Apparently a grisly discovery rather than a simple chunk of fuselage to warrant a personal visit like this. Sam stiffened and felt Nash’s hand slip into his.
Major Johnson continued. “Some people were spotted on a remote and insignificant island. They were determined through initial surveillance to be stranded there. When the drone descended to make itself known, the individuals communicated with it by writing in the sand. They identified themselves as survivors of the TransOceanic Flight 3012 plane crash and wrote out their names.”
Sam sat rigidly and held his breath as Major Johnson paused. Survivors? Could it really be possible? These men wouldn’t be here making a personal visit to inform him, would they, unless…?
“Dr. Miller-Greene, we’d appreciate it if you would give a positive identification of the man who indicated he was your husband, Henry.”
Time seemed to stop as Sam stared into the man’s eyes, trying to comprehend what he’d been told. Nash’s hand crushed his.
“Henry’s alive?” His voice broke with just those two words, and that’s all he was able to manage.
Henry and Sam Miller-Greene are living the dream. They love their careers — which afford each of them opportunities to travel to exotic locations — they love their home, Sam’s caring family, and each other. They disagree on the subject of adoption, but are fully committed to each other in marriage … ’Til Death Do Us Part.
The dream is shattered when Henry’s plane crashes, and he’s presumed dead. But four people — Henry, two other men, and a child — survive undetected on a remote, small, and insignificant island. Will Sam and Henry’s love be able to survive as well?
Henry fights to endure in harsh conditions, never knowing when disaster will strike. Sam struggles with his loss, but with help moves on with his life. Will Sam be able to put aside his new love when he reunites with Henry?
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12 thoughts on “#AtoZChallenge – J is for Major Johnson”
I’d say “poor Nash”, but I don’t know if that is the case
I think we can be assured it’ll be a rough time for him no matter the ultimate outcome. 🙂
Poor Sam! Poor Nash! <3
How bittersweet to come to acceptance on the death of a loved one only to question it again
And poor Sam had such a tough time coming to terms with Henry’s “death.”
Oh how interesting. I want to read it now and I needed a book for T. 🙂 \\
Melissa @ My Creatively Random Life
Aw, thanks. 💕 I hope you’ll enjoy the story. 🙂
Great prologue. Definitely draws the reader in wanting to find out more.
Thank you! 😁
I’m sure that will be quite the emotional scene in full. How awkward for poor Nash.
Discarded Darlings – Jean Davis, Speculative Fiction Writer, A to Z: Editing Fiction